It's my first attempt at a strip. Please read it or i'll stab myself in the face with this rake.
*holds rake up*
:(

PUHLEASE READ IT!!!
*throws a tantrum*
yeah ... that's right .. you heard me ... a tantrum
:P

1. There's a much easier way to post comics than the way you did it. Click the "quote" link at the bottom of this post to see how it's done.

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2. The word "kthx" should never be used. By anyone. Ever. My using it just now is not an exception. I shouldn't have done that.

3. Try using less narration. Use dialog to convey the same information. We can figure out what's going on in this strip without extra help.

4. Other than that, the comic's okay. Keep at it. Welcome to Stripcreator.

KTHX!

j/k.