There pretty bad.....thers
Freakin
Freakin Part 2
Freakin 3
Dimension
Jinko

Pleez.... I made more i know there crappy but i wanna know if other peepz are readin them

I didn't enjoy reading these. But atleast they're better than the Dragon Ball Z Halloween thing. Those were painful. Anyway, the real problem was your use of the words "freakin'" and "crap" so often. As much as I agree that those pseudo swear words are better than the real thing, which would have made it even worse, I was surprised that you wouldn't see that detracting from the overall experiance of reading this. There were interesting ideas mixed about in there but overall it was pretty poor.

http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?author=DaBeat98889&ID=188062

http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?author=DaBeat98889&ID=188075

k thanks for your opinion!

any one else? pleez?

:lol