Ok, I think you had a really good idea going with the animal shelter thing, but somehow it got messed up. I think it might have been narrarating too much. Anyway, for a newbie, it wasn't that bad. I'll check it out if you make anymore like that.
The ones with the space ppl were very good zegon....Keep that going...and what DID happen to the animal shelter and the green guy...Good Luck Zegon...Check Out mine...Heres a sample