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Xuanwu December 26, 2003 10:53 PM	I've actually found time to work on a series. It has five parts currently, and will continue as I think of more punchlines. 200368 200383 200566 200701 200707 Please provide some C&C so I can improve. Thanks!
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agilemonkey December 27, 2003 12:53 AM	They are all right, but they aren't really laugh-out-loud and the jokes seem unoriginal and really cheesey. It has potential. just try and be a little more origianl and make your jokes less lame, unexplained and unfunny;) then you will prolly have a kick ass strip. Sorry bout the harsh criticism though. I'll keep an eye on your work and keep opinionated bout it:P hehe
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MikeyG December 27, 2003 9:17 AM	You suck!
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agilemonkey December 27, 2003 6:44 PM	That's one way of putting it
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Xuanwu December 27, 2003 9:48 PM	quote: You suck! Can you elaborate? Knowing why you think I suck is one of the ways I can improve. Or is it that you just don't like puns? 200837
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Xuanwu January 4, 2004 3:53 PM	I forgot to update the thread. 201297 Haven't thought of any new ones for this series in a while. I'll probably let it lie then get back to it later.
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NooniePuuBunny January 4, 2004 8:00 PM	shakes head sadly
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