Forum archives » Comic Showcase » Want some more critiques!

Beaz
January 6, 2004 7:54 AM

I'm posting this in both "comic showoff" forums. I'd really just like to get as much feedback as possible. Are these entertaining to you? If so, why? If not, why?

I like making them, but I want you to like reading them. Let me know if I should take a different direction.

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jes_lawson
January 6, 2004 4:01 PM

I liked this - keep 'em coming.

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Matchbook_Romance
January 6, 2004 4:54 PM

I as well enjoyed it and the rest of your IT series.

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dcomposed
January 6, 2004 7:58 PM

I liked it also wangs dongs.

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attitudechicka
January 7, 2004 7:50 AM

This particular comic was funny, however I'd lose the narration boxes. The last one, at least, is completely unnecessary, but I suppose you used it more for "balance"?

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Beaz
January 7, 2004 8:12 AM

Yeah, I've received some comments on the narration boxes, so I'm trying to stay aware of it now and use them less.

Thanks for the compliment. Please check out my other ones too :)

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