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That was like a public service announcement from the deepest bowels of hell.

i liked the idea behind your comic better than what was actually written. maybe if the cig offers some funny statistics or stuff from the surgeon general, like

"The U.S. Department of Health and Human Services says 43% of digestion comes from carcinogens found only in cigarettes. That's right, kids. Nonsmokers are constipated."

"It's true. I ain't shit in weeks."

there's a lot you can do with this. my advice is to stick with the same idea and do a series of them until you think you've played out the possibilities. that's one of the best ways to improve, in my opinion.

I'll agree with the Graykane. It was humorous and I think you have a ton of material to be mined from it. I love the happy little cigarette man.