ei there, these are my first two attempts at writting comics, so tell me what you think
. Be nice. Or be brutal. Or be grim and frostbitten. Just read and comment.

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#1: mmmmmmmmmmm . . uh
#2: ha!
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eh heh....

meh.

The second one was good.

The 2nd one was quite good. The first one wasn't quite good enough to be "crappy."

I so concur.

1st one = drab driech day.

2nd one = sunny with occasional outbreaks of bwah ha.

thanks for the opinions. Yeah the first one come's out like a very bad trip on Kool Aid, i guess.

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Your last comic has been done a million times but from what I see, you're on the path to some pure comic gold. =D

i think those are very good also

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i think those are very good also

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Wow, i'm very impressed. Bravo!

Ei thanks everyone for their feedback!
Its hard working up to a good punchline in just 3 panels (expecially if you're a n00b =p).
Practise make's perfect.

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Melkor, your name AND your comics rock. I love LOTR.