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PsycicPsyco2
April 19, 2004 10:45 AM

Howdy...
I often get a lot of good comments on my comics, and I'll probably be registering another account soon and I wanted to know which ones are the best and should be put on my new account...

Also, most of them are about a forum I visit...

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possums
April 19, 2004 12:22 PM

cant spell psycho or psychic... I'm gonna let that slide.

however your comics totally blow ass. "You're gay," is not a funny punchline.

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evil_d
April 19, 2004 7:22 PM

Agreed; you need some work. Some of your comics have funny bits at the beginning, but end badly because you don't know what to do anymore. In "Teenage Boys", the real punchline is on the left in the second panel. Don't feel like you have to use every dialogue bubble... if you've only got three lines, for example, put one in each panel.

Your Penny Arcade strips... I don't know what the deal is with them. They'd be unrecognizeable as jokes about PA if you hadn't told us they were supposed to be. Some of your other strips have the same problem... they seem to be making fun of something, but I can't figure out what it is. My advice is to think harder about what's funny about your subject before you start writing.

These comics show some wit:

/comics/PsycicPsyco2/199676/
/comics/PsycicPsyco2/201052/

Both show good structure and end with an actual humorous punchline. The latter, in fact, is funny throughout.

Keep at it, and good luck. Oh, and don't rewrite your comics with your new account. Just put a link to the old account in your profile or favorites.

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biped
April 19, 2004 7:36 PM

I recently did a Habbo Hotel spoof called "Blabbo Hotel." I thought it was really funny the way I replaced the word "Habbo" with the word "Blabbo."

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NooniePuuBunny
April 19, 2004 7:54 PM

quote:
I recently did a Habbo Hotel spoof called "Blabbo Hotel." I thought it was really funny the way I replaced the word "Habbo" with the word "Blabbo."

Oh shut the bobba up...

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biped
April 19, 2004 7:58 PM

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PsycicPsyco2
April 21, 2004 10:38 AM

quote:
"You're gay," is not a funny punchline.

The "You're Gay" stuff is part of stereotyping the teenagers. You'll probably find today that "you're gay" is the most common insult from teenage boys today...

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User #16352
April 21, 2004 10:40 AM

quote:
quote:
"You're gay," is not a funny punchline.

The "You're Gay" stuff is part of stereotyping the teenagers. You'll probably find today that "you're gay" is the most common insult from teenage boys today...
I call people pulsating cunts of fury!

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MikeyG
April 21, 2004 11:11 AM

quote:
quote:
"You're gay," is not a funny punchline.

The "You're Gay" stuff is part of stereotyping the teenagers. You'll probably find today that "you're gay" is the most common insult from teenage boys today...

You're gay!

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xxausrottenxx
April 21, 2004 1:02 PM

you're gayer

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biped
April 21, 2004 1:37 PM

biped has entered the room.

biped: u r all gay

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NooniePuuBunny
April 21, 2004 7:06 PM

I have a friend named Jim.
Just so he knows I'm talking to him...
I say "HEY JIM!!!"
Thats how he knows I'm talking to him.

:)

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