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valuedan
April 28, 2004 12:40 AM

These are my attempts at making comics. Opinions?

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Floyd10
April 28, 2004 5:59 AM

They're ok

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OMG_DaGmAr_6481987
April 28, 2004 6:27 AM

quote:
I am making comics now

So am I.

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biped
April 28, 2004 6:48 AM

Are you making comics now?

Are you making comics now?

Are you making comics now?

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valuedan
April 28, 2004 7:42 PM

YES

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NooniePuuBunny
April 28, 2004 8:19 PM

How about now?

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valuedan
April 28, 2004 10:20 PM

N.. Yes! Stop asking that! I'm making comics! MAKING!

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valuedan
April 28, 2004 11:34 PM

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MikeyG
April 29, 2004 6:13 AM

Um....no.

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biped
April 29, 2004 6:56 AM

You are feeling out the characters and situations and getting used to working with them, and laying the groundwork for potentially better comics to come.

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MikeyG
April 29, 2004 7:00 AM

And stop using the goddamn dog on ball.

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valuedan
April 29, 2004 12:03 PM

You are a cruel man, MikeyG, cruel to the bone. Cold as ice, you are.

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NooniePuuBunny
April 29, 2004 8:48 PM

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You are a cruel man, MikeyG, cruel to the bone. Cold as ice, you are.

With bad grammar, you post.

With bad taste, makes you comics. Need better coherence, they do. Funny they do need. Make no sense, they do. You can improve I do think. Do or do not, there is no try.

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biped
April 29, 2004 9:00 PM

More Dog On Ball!

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CowTipper
April 29, 2004 9:04 PM

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You are a cruel man, MikeyG, cruel to the bone. Cold as ice, you are.

With bad grammar, you post.

With bad taste, makes you comics. Need better coherence, they do. Funny they do need. Make no sense, they do. You can improve I do think. Do or do not, there is no try.




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valuedan
April 29, 2004 9:30 PM

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You are a cruel man, MikeyG, cruel to the bone. Cold as ice, you are.

With bad grammar, you post.

With bad taste, makes you comics. Need better coherence, they do. Funny they do need. Make no sense, they do. You can improve I do think. Do or do not, there is no try.



YOU criticize ME? I don't find YOUR comics particularly funny either, but you don't see ME nitpicking them ("where's the p?") You... you... BRGHRHGHghGH!

I'm sorry if absurdist humor is not your cup o' tea, but those are the breaks, I suppose. It's a style. I aint changing, not for you, not for smiling George Bush, not for NO ONE.
I aint changing my double negatives, neither! Nope!

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Jdude
April 29, 2004 9:34 PM

I like them... they're like white ninja and achewood COMBINED!

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NooniePuuBunny
April 29, 2004 9:58 PM

quote:
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You are a cruel man, MikeyG, cruel to the bone. Cold as ice, you are.

With bad grammar, you post.

With bad taste, makes you comics. Need better coherence, they do. Funny they do need. Make no sense, they do. You can improve I do think. Do or do not, there is no try.



YOU criticize ME? I don't find YOUR comics particularly funny either, but you don't see ME nitpicking them ("where's the p?") You... you... BRGHRHGHghGH!

I'm sorry if absurdist humor is not your cup o' tea, but those are the breaks, I suppose. It's a style. I aint changing, not for you, not for smiling George Bush, not for NO ONE.
I aint changing my double negatives, neither! Nope!

^-^ It was a combo of constructive criticism and a joke all in one. Rarely do I ever post any kind of criticism or comment toward a particular comment (I'm usually interacting with someoene else).

You're right, I'm not really an absurdist. I'm a surrealist.

BTW: If you thought my post was nitpicky, you've really only hit the tip of the ice berg. ^-^ Just a warning, not an attack on your comics or a suggestion on what you should do with them. Tis a cruel world here... Specially for nonpaying newbies with comics that don't float the boat of the paying regulars. So be prepared for much much more. I've been here since October of 2003 and I still get no respect (I myself being a non-paying semi-newb with sucky comics after all...not to mention I tend to lose my temper at people's behavior at times...so I really dont have much going for me)...

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valuedan
April 29, 2004 10:14 PM

If not for the word "improve," that would have been quite the insulting post, and I'm not sure if the addition of that word exactly launched your comic into the realm of "constructive criticism." Also, that joke hurt me in a way I've never been hurt before, and the pain will linger on until my death. I'll look the other way, though, for the sake of human decency, and because I'm so cool (you can feel the coolness through your monitor).

And Jdude is right, by the way. In fact, two of my major influences ARE www.whiteninjacomics.com and www.achewood.com. Also, Michael Kupperman's "Snake n' Bacon" seem to have had a major effect on me, along with (to a lesser extent) Tony Millionare's "Maakies."

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biped
April 29, 2004 10:21 PM

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valuedan
April 29, 2004 10:27 PM

That was 100% in the hizzy.

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valuedan
April 29, 2004 10:34 PM

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I don't actually think MikeyG is a communist. Those big hats are warm in the winter, though.

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valuedan
April 30, 2004 12:01 AM

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