When I read the topic, my first thought was "Well that's kind of a morbid subject for a comic strip."
Aside from that, you have a funny idea, but you had difficulty communicating it. I had to read the strip a couple of times to understand it. Try improving your grammar and punctuation. Also, notice that there are two "asiangirl" characters, and they don't really look alike. The same advice applies to your other strips as well.
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