I'm new here...thanks for any replies.I have 7 comics.

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/BMJ

Let's pretend I knew there was already a link to my comics under my message and forget the link that I posted.

You don't always have to state who is talking.

I know, I just like it better that way. I'll probably stop eventually.

Needs more Oggy...

I agree with Match--putting the name of the character at the beginning of the dialog box is distracting and redundant. We know who is talking because there are only two characters and each one has their own dialog box with a convenient arrow pointing to the character speaking.

"My face is bleeding."

Actually made me laugh to some extent. But yes, stop with the names, it's confusing and silly.

Not too bad.

"I'm think going to go adopt a child and love him and pet him."

Maybe not gramatically correct...but this is a great line.

*adds an "I'm" to that sentence while you're not looking*

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"I'm think going to go adopt a child and love him and pet him."

Maybe not gramatically correct...but this is a great line.

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Wow...I am noton top of things today.

*erases the "'m" from the first "I'm"*

"Noton"? Is that a contraction of "not a futon"?

Yes.

I give up.

*kicks self in the face*

Those are awfully flexible legs.

I take Yoga.

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I take Yoga.

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Hungry I am, a picnic basket I want, Boo-Boo.

Going to like this Mr. Forest Ranger is not, Yogi.

Use the forks, Boo-book, use the forks.

Or was that Yogi-Wan?

You have much potential, young one. If you cease with the "name-" format, all funny might be restored to your comics again ... maybe ...

... if I feel like laughing ...

... ha ...

THAT'S IT! NO...MORE...NAMES!

HAPPY?!

I think you should get rid of that "name-" thing. I don't know if anyone's brought that up yet.

Also if you want to know how to make a line down the center of a panel, I can tell you how to do that.

Um, moving past inside jokes to actual criticism, your first few strips were a little random for my tastes. The bully series was okay, but not hilarious; I guess it was just nothing we haven't seen before. Put a new face on it, make it unique and interesting somehow.

And write some new stuff. You've been silent for a couple of days. Give us more to criticize! I have a feeling you could turn out to be pretty good with a little practice.

I'm letting my creative juices flow. That takes time.

That means I have no ideas right now.

Do you guys think I should do another series?

I'm afraid there's no way to know whether or not you should do a new series until after you've done it.