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knightsquireJune 17, 2004 8:09 AM
[URL=http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/knightsquire/]Here's my first comic...[/url] I'm up to about 20 or so now... please let me know what you think ;-) Thanks!
bipedJune 17, 2004 8:35 AM
Not bad...I would cut out some of the filler and bunch the funny fun stuff in more concentrated clumps, though, and make it a bit more funny fun.