Hey, Im New But Check Out My Comics, My Mates Like Them. If You Like Em Why Dont You Put Me As A Favourite Artist in Your Profile, Thanks

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/MichaelMartin
thats the code to get to my Comics

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/MichaelMartin
thats the code to get to my Comics

WAAAAAYYY too much unecessary narration. As a matter of fact, NONE of it is necessary. I am stifling the urge to chew the shit out of your comics, so appreciate that.

But start with the narration. Lose it and see how it goes.

Too much narration, good basis for ideas. I epscially liked this:

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Room for improvment, but good try.

janm the fukkin yello out of the tops of yer comix, dude! Let the brain do some work for a change......
but keep it up, you'll get it.....lots of nerve asking to be made a fave so soooooooooon.....

Leave me alone, I'm eating at trash in the box.....

Aw, boinky, be nice!

/comics/MichaelMartin/238168/ Try That Link, Its My New One
And What The hell Boinky, Im Only New

This is my Newest Comic, Just A Quick One To Show That Fairys Never Shut Up
/comics/MichaelMartin/0/

Sorry That Didnt Work, Check My Comics, My New One is About A SAtupid Fairy

Capitalizing Every Single Word Not Only Takes More Work, It Is Also Retarded, Stop That And Also Use Punctuation Other Than Commas And Your Comics Will Probably Get Better, Along With Your Conveyed Intelligence Level

Follow the advice above about punctuation and narration and stuff, and you will be on your way to funnier comics in no time! Also, before you hit "save", look at the comic for a minute or two and think of ways that it could be made funnier. You won't believe what fantastic ideas will pop into your head at the most unexpected moments!

I liked this line: "Im Not A Little Girl, Im A Pimp, And We Are At The bottom Of The Ocean."