Well, first, I'd clean up your sentence structure. Unless the person is extremely funny (as some I've seen are), poor spelling or grammar can offset the potential hilarity in a comic. Capitalize only the start of a sentence and proper nouns. Stop using comma splices. End your sentences with a period. You'd be surprised how much better your comics would probably look just with that.
Second, I'd stick to just one thing at a time. If you still want to try serious comics, fine. If you want to attempt funny comics as well, go for it. However, in three whole panels it's pretty much impossible to do both, let alone to do either well. The comics instead come off as neither dramatic nor funny, only androgynously lukewarm. Make one comic purely serious and the next purely funny, if you really want to do both styles.
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Then again, Ive saw some comics worse than mine
I know. I believe you could get better; however, your current comics are not very good.
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PS. IM ONLY A NEWBIE
You should probably be glad that I got to this first than someone like boinky33. I even got reamed out on my first day by the most eloquent biped. All of us have gone through the shaky newbie stage at one point or another, although some probably were funnier to begin with than others and had less adjustment to do. Don't take negative criticism personally.