I got a few chuckles out of them. They weren't that bad.
My only advice is what I seem to tell every single new person: clean up the English in your comics. Comics written like this tend to be funnier (to me at least) than comics...writen...like this. Spelling and grammatical errors are distracting and thus detract from the overall hilarity of a comic.
Still, as I said, they weren't that bad. Stick around; you're better than quite a few new people whom I've seen.