Coherent. Concise. Non-horrifying. Hard to assess your potential talent from this one comic, though.

The asterisks were distracting -- I think you should use the actual curse words, unless they are offensive to you personally, and let the obscenity filter take care of bleeping them for those who choose to use it.

If you make more comics please add them to this thread so that we might get a better idea of what you can do.

Yeah, I agree and sorry about that. I made the comic intending to post it first on a less open minded message board.

Oh yeah.

i dont think you have to worry about a close minded forum

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Sorry for interrupting your thread, rentedsandwich. Please carry on.

CHUCKLE!!! Poor Billy.

i love pointless obscenity

I love obscene pointlessness.

New one.

Goddamn, I'm lazy.

I've made about a dozen comics since the last time I posted. Like I said, I'm lazy.

I like any comic that the outcome is someone bursting into flames.

Any comic that ends in an assraping orgy is a good one.
Needless to say, I've been disappointed with your comics so far.

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Any comic that ends in an assraping orgy is a good one.
Needless to say, I've been disappointed with your comics so far.

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Who needs a job? Just charge admission to the assraping orgies!

Hrm. I was surprisingly amused by these comics.

You'd be surprised how often people expect me to suck, then are like, "Oh, that wasn't that bad."
It's my strategy.

The new one is good.