I want to see what you think of them

Your comix are in the 4s dude. Read more peeps comix and form new ideas based on ideas gone before.

Work on your writing.

The D&D one was funny. More please.

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Your comix are in the 4s dude.

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The last one was pretty good. I will also say they are in the 4s.

Slightly below average, which means tolerable, not horrible, but just not funny enough to get a chuckle. I think you can improve and you don't seem annoying thus far. I'll go with the 4 crowd here.

yeah id say 5 or 6, but considering these are your first comics is a definate plus. I'd imagine good things from you

I don't see any jokes at all. 2.

Thanks for saying i have SOME potential, i'll keep working at it.

Here's an idea for future strips:

take a word from your everyday vocabulary and Google it. Keep doing that until you find something funny. Analyze why that made you laugh then do 3 panels on something similar.

If that doesn't work just use TOBOR, Spankling and the word "RAWR" in sequence as Spankling reads the news.

Now if THAT doesn't work, go to "FIGHTS START HERE" and tell everyone that you are really JDPLVY looking for advice. The spice will flow!

I'm a newbie too, plus, I come at things with an English major's perspective, but here goes anyway:

I like the one with the bug best. Kind of a neat absurdist bent to it and I laughed out loud. I give your stuff a 5. Good luck.

I'm a newbie too, plus, I come at things with an English major's perspective, but here goes anyway:

I like the one with the bug best. Kind of a neat absurdist bent to it and I laughed out loud. I give your stuff a 5. Good luck.

You're actually not that bad... I've seen worse.

You also actually kinda make an attempt to tell real jokes sometimes, which is great. Too often, people here are quick to rely on uber-obsurist humor. [The Post-Modern humor obviously has elements of obsurity in it. I'm not saying that obsurist humor is bad.. It's just a fine line that people walk when they tell obsure jokes. People can't just blurt out "MY NAME IS RASPUTIN! I WEAR SOCKS INSTEAD OF CONDOMS!" and expect a laugh from anyone with sanity.]

While you have the potential, you like.. something. I can't quiet put my finger on it. There's just something that lies between potentinal and actually creating a laugh.. that gray area you (and I, most of the time) live in. Since I can't nail funny everytime, I can't really vote for or against, but I can tell you the few things I know

Captialize a bit more.. and since the pictures are fixed, it's also a good idea to rely a little more on dialouge. ..and that's it for now. Later!

2 and a half

1.778912. That's after formulating how crappy they were and adding decimal points for them being so bad that they're good. Also, vaginas.

-2... joking. The D&D and the one with the fire were good. Fire good.

Yeah, im going for that postmodern add to it, because i love postmodern, that fact that someone knew that makes me happy that it was evident, but i will try and make some more better ones.

yep, 4's roughly.

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You're on the internet! If you want to see a vagina that bad, surf around a while and you'll find a naked lady.

Here, try this!

I loved 'Get Crunk' and the rest were ok. I rate 6.5 out of 110% of something else.

I just recently did two more, and i think that i thought these ones through a little bit more, so tell me what you guys think about them... thanks for the input. (grammar is bad on the first one, but try and deal with it, i made the 2nd one more correct because of the 1st ones grammatical n00bishness)

They're sweet. Not all very funny but most are. You have one of the best beginnings I seen.
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I love your work and hope to see more.

Any new ideas/constructive criticisms on my work? Most of my friends really like them, but i was wondering what you guys were thinking.

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yeah id say 5 or 6, but considering these are your first comics is a definate plus. I'd imagine good things from you

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On a scale of 1 to 10? I dunno, that's kinda tricky. I'd say on the whole, probably about 4, but that doesn't really take into account that there are some pretty good lines in some of them.

I gotta go with the crowd that the D&D one is probably the best, but besides that, I also enjoyed the guy sitting by the fire. While the AoC > Constitution > You one had an uncommonly funny first panel, the rest didn't really come together. Also, heliocentrism 1337 PWNS J00.

Yeah, that AoC one i should have spent more time on, and now its pretty much a disgrace minus the first panel, oh well i will keep craking at it.

2, the crunk robot was just good enough to bring you up from the ones