Hey all, I just want someone to read my stuff, cause im not entirely sure anybody does, so here's a link to one of my favorites I've got.

Sort of funny, but it lacks something from taking your strip to the next level... probably dialogue.

Thanks for the advice, that's exactly the shit that I'm looking for people to say, thanks again!

By the way, your band is pretty good, i am impressed :)

thanks, thats actually the singers solo stuff right now, we're gonna be putting some more stuff up there once we get some more stuff, its kind of a young band, but she'll be glad to hear you listened.