Please check out my latest comic, as well as my others.
Your constructive criticism is appreciated.

Not bad, but try not to put in information that isn't necessary. (A good rule of thumb is that the narration box is almost never necessary.)

I'd suggest the following changes:

/comics/not_Scyess/268130/

This is EVEN BETTER.

/comics/80_Million_Fleas/268157/

Thanks not_scyess. I get it. Much better.

80_million_fleas - Not funny.