Lemme know what you think...thanks in advance.

Much better. I like it. The background in the 2nd panel can really be the same as the one in the 1st, though.

Also notice the [url] tags aren't really necessary for posting comics. Just paste the url itself and the comic appears. the [url] tag is only for posting links.

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The background in the 2nd panel can really be the same as the one in the 1st, though.

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I thought the same thing at first, but then I realized that if they were in the same panel, then the dog would have already brought the bone over there. They are still supposed to be a distance apart.

I think that could have just as easily been portrayed by having Death on the far left hand side of the left panel and the dog on the far right hand side of the right panel and nothing but white space in between. The middle panel really adds nothing and to me is visually confusing. Funny idea, though.

And yes, do please keep all these strips in one thread. It's generally good form to not clutter up the main page with a lot of topics unless each topic is devoted to an ongoing series of some sort.