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EugeneBowlkie
February 6, 2005 12:30 AM

Ok, so I'm new to this site. I just signed up about 15 minutes ago and I've made 3 comics. I just wanted to know what people thought of them. Here's one...

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Reading that one and my two others and telling me what you think would be greatly appeciated! Thanks!

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User #47829
February 6, 2005 10:03 AM

I loved it! Very funny! I like random stupiod shit like that. That's why my comics are also random and stupid. Keep up the good work!!

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ArtemisStrong
February 6, 2005 12:19 PM

"Worship Jesus" was really funny. After that it was kind of downhill. Keep with the absurdist stuff, cut down on the dialogue and narration and you'll be fine.

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theReverend
February 6, 2005 2:25 PM

Agreed. The first one was really good, the second one was mostly good besides the confusing punctuation, and the last one was okay cept the last panel was a little weak. In my opinion.

But hey, nobody cares what I say, GOD DAMMIT.

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biped
February 6, 2005 2:39 PM

Look how funnier is punchline in clown comic if no narration get in way. Clown burn up little girl, suddenly think, "I am, eh, the fired." People read, laugh at funny antics of clown.

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not_Scyess
February 6, 2005 2:57 PM

I thought the comic was rough, but funny. I'd like it better if, as biped suggested, you kept the dialog to only what's necessary to make it funny.

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User #44826
February 8, 2005 11:45 PM

You're a non-donor and therefore cannot get your feeback.

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andydougan
February 9, 2005 1:08 PM

I like them. Most folks' early comics are total shit, so these are promising.

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