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CHUBBY I mean this as a fellow stripper when I say you expand into dialog too much. Keep it short, like BigEvilDan's cock.

#12 has potential
#1 and #9 are funny, but need work
#4 is actually pretty good as it is
The rest are pretty boring.

Your problem is that you go off on these huge narratives which try to tell a complicated story. Your stories are usually interesting, but they're more than you can really accomplish with the art and format limitations on this site. What you end up with is long rambling set-up for a relatively small number of jokes.

What you really need is comicbookcreator.com. Or just to draw these things out.

If you must try these long stories, at least try to put a joke in every comic to keep it from getting boring and annoying the reader. You can further a plot and still keep the funny flowing, you know.

I try to give each strip a ending that is either a.) a cliffhanger or b.) funny, at least in the context of the series. Also, I try to make each series stand alone, but most of them are interlinked. This is a prequel to THE SON ALSO RISES, and SEALAB 2021 is a sequel to TSAR, which also spunoff THE $10K MARTINI and its sequels. Knowledge of a series' forerunners may enhance one's enjoyment. Or not.

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I try to give each strip a ending that is either a.) a cliffhanger or b.) funny, at least in the context of the series. Also, I try to make each series stand alone, but most of them are interlinked. This is a prequel to THE SON ALSO RISES, and SEALAB 2021 is a sequel to TSAR, which also spunoff THE $10K MARTINI and its sequels. Knowledge of a series' forerunners may enhance one's enjoyment. Or not.

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