This is my first comic. Tell me what you think, but be easy on me because like I said it is my first.

Here is my 2nd one. I know it isn't the best, but tell me what you think.

Maybe that last comic consists of a bunch of random statements which you find amusing, but it has no coherency. Add a punchline and you might have something.

how is this?

To be specific, it's your first comic under that alias, not your first comic ever.