Hi Everyone, I am new to creating strips but I have been lurking at strip creator for a while now. (sounds like a first time caller/long time listener plug)

I have a bunch of parody scripts for strips that I've been stockpiling from websites I've been involved in but the couple of times I tried to collaborate with an actual artist they dissapeared with no final product.

I decided to take the plunge with stripcreator to get all the pent up creativity out of me before something bad happens.

Of course I offer up the obligatory Lord of the Rings toon but I can't help it as it just begs to be parodied :)

My other strip is basically about my adventures in unemployment in both the US and the UK where I now live.

So with all the blather out of the way here are my two offerings.

Thanks!

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Hrm... keep posting, they show promise.

I like the first one, but suit's third panel dialog is way too long and runs over the joke. The second one is good, too, though as you said, LOtR just begs for it so is a bit obvious..

Thanks for the encouragement. The trouble with humour is finding the simplest way to say something but still get your point across.

Here are a couple more Unemployed. Lisa was rated in the real world but kangaroo is perhaps too subtle for some? Your opinions appreciated

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I find strips with the kangaroo are usually quite strained, as if the stripper likes the bizarre idea of a kanga with a gun, then tries to shoe-horn a gag into it.

The one above it worked better for me.

Tony