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I know, this is tastless rubbish, I was very ill inspired!

This is a really bad piece of work...

I think you've accidentally stumbled on something that's funny. Well, Pt. 2 was crap, but 1 would've been perfect without the narration. And 3 wasn't bad at all.

If you stop sucking, though, I will no longer get to hate you and that will annoy me.

Part 3 was pretty good. Funnier than most of your others.

You still need to work on punctuation and contractions. Most of your sentences are missing periods at the end. You also have a tendency to confuse "You're" (the contraction for "you are") with "your" (the posessive form of "you.")

I recommend this page:

http://english-zone.com/index.php?ID=63

This page has lots of good exercises:

http://english-zone.com/index.php?ID=60

In particular, this exercise:

http://www.english-zone.com/spelling/cont-01.html

Actually, the whole site is helpful:

http://www.english-zone.com