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Darth_Freeman
April 5, 2005 4:47 PM


hmmm?

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flipynif1
April 5, 2005 5:32 PM

It's kinda funny....go with a harder punchline

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not_Scyess
April 5, 2005 10:17 PM

It's not funny. Lose the narration and totally redo the comic.

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PhreakyChinchilla
April 6, 2005 6:48 AM

Ack.

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NooniePuuBunny
April 6, 2005 7:31 AM

It was kinda bleh, but I did like the line "Burn you Slushie Bitch!"

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PrimoOoze1138
April 6, 2005 11:42 AM

Meh, not so funny. The title, however was funny.

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flipynif1
April 6, 2005 4:57 PM

NIce critique, how about some real critique, you know like here is a suggestion...man you guys are cruel sometimes

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Boritom
April 8, 2005 11:28 PM

That one isn't your best, but I gotta say I like some of the others...

This one had me cracking up for a while...
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I'm not entirely sure why, but it really hit me just right...

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Seph_Deathstorm
April 9, 2005 1:22 AM

These people are really cruel sometimes? I invite them to be, Cruelness is usually best, as the fear of complete forum humiliation seems to make you antsy to never make a bad comic. However... That doesn't work on me, cause I really don't tend to take criticism seriously either way, however my ears are always open for any sort of critique.

As for the comic, I agree. It could be much funnier, if it was simply redone. Add a harder punchline, and how about some sharpened dialogue, let the snowman say more to infuriate the Masked Guy (Who stangely looks like a Pewter Jason Statue). Just not too much, as too much dialouge causes most people to be bored to the point of not wanting to read the rest. Which is really a shame (Glares at a few select people). ;o

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