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Shadow_The_Hedgehog
April 10, 2005 4:50 PM

Here's one!

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I hope you like it!

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Inflatable_Man
April 10, 2005 4:58 PM

Not totally hopeless.

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andydougan
April 10, 2005 6:02 PM

Exactly what I was going to say.

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not_Scyess
April 10, 2005 10:41 PM

I agree, but I'm too tired to elaborate.

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Inflatable_Man
April 11, 2005 7:11 AM

It seems to inspire that kind of reaction.

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MikeyG
April 11, 2005 7:43 AM

It seems to be missing an element that is usually necessary in a comic. Like, the comedy part.

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fuzzyman
April 11, 2005 10:06 AM

Not sure about the setup for the punchline, or the purpose of the narration in the last panel. I think the joke is supposed to be that it wasn't an earthquake at all that caused the tsunami, but Willie's farting. Which could be funny, but it doesn't set it up that way. The title also gives away the punchline.

I'd do something like this:

Billie: "Man, that Asian tsunami was a real disaster."

Willie: "Yeah, can you believe they think an earthquake caused it?"

Billie: "It didn't?"

Willie: "Nope, it's all my fault."

Billie: "You mean...?"

Willie: "I had a craving for squid and it made me a little gassy. So sue me."

Not great, but an improvement.

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