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Did I say "not totally hopeless"?

Ooops.

What I meant to say was "pure shit."

Plus that was the worst English accent since Dick van Dyke.

The narration is useless and distracting.
What the fuck is "RAL"?
Running away is not a joke.
The bee's dialog is muddled and nearly nonsensical in every panel.
(what andydougan said)
You used an X in the word "comics."
The bee's reactions don't match what sharkman is does.
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...then again, it would've been easier just to say what Inflateable said.