This is only 3rd one in a soon to be great series. Just check them out for yourselves.

It would probably be better without the narration -- the images and dialogue speak for themselves in this one.

I think the punchline could be stronger, too. Though a mother who spontaneously combusts (and doesn't die) whenever she gets angry would be a pretty funny character. "Billy, look what you made me do! You made me angry and now I've gone and melted my Hummels!"

On second thought, maybe that wouldn't be funny.

That was one of my first the others in the series are a lot better.

And also, try to avoid using abbreviations such as "OMG" unless absolutely necessary.