As I already said you show a lot of promise. And everyone has at least one Tobor strip in the dark recesses of their comic history (including not_Scyess I'm sure), so don't worry about it.
"And everyone has at least one Tobor strip in the dark recesses of their comic history"
I donut have a Tobar strip. Will I ever make one? Not bloody likley. btw, Tobar sounds alot like the gay robot off Adam Sandler's, "shh dont tell" album. Maybe he reads SC?