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Debaser
April 24, 2005 5:51 AM

Hey.
My newest strips are very movie trailer-influenced...

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Inflatable_Man
April 24, 2005 8:19 AM

Thanks to you I've been tearing apart my room searching for my Pixies CDs for the last half an hour...

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Debaser
April 25, 2005 5:45 AM

How come the posts in my threads are rarely about my comics and often about my nick?

Ah, well. Maybe I should be thankful for the answers I get...

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ChromeSteel
April 25, 2005 9:16 AM

Ok here you go. I'll try to keep it constructive.

There were several I didn't get.

Reverend Hellraiser was a decent idea with sub-par execution. More of a punchline would have been appreciated.

Satan's new style was ruined by the narration. Remember, narration is a last resort, only to be used when you can't convey the information some other way. I still laughed at the dumb little "Bllzee-Bob" line though.

That's about it. Work on your punchlines and you'll be set.

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Debaser
April 27, 2005 4:58 AM

It's so hard to make funny comics at stripcreator!
IRL are my punch-lines often based on expressions, reactions, actions etc. And the language's also a problem. I'm from Sweden, y'know...

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PhreakyChinchilla
April 27, 2005 6:52 AM

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I'm from Sweden, y'know...

We don't care about your handicap here. Stop making excuses.

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andydougan
April 27, 2005 7:26 AM

Most of the people here are Americans and Scots. In my experience Swedes speak better English than them.

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not_Scyess
April 27, 2005 9:08 AM

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It's so hard to make funny comics at stripcreator!
IRL are my punch-lines often based on expressions, reactions, actions etc. And the language's also a problem. I'm from Sweden, y'know...
That's part of the challenge. Why did 15th centruy poets have to make poems in iambic pentameter and sonnet form instead of free verse spoken word like poets today? Well, for one so they wouldn't suck as much. But also because the rules make it more of a challenge to produce something good.

People often want to make comics here that require experessions or positions from characters that don't exist. Sometimes they make them anyway -- and the comics always suck. The sad fact is that if you want a range of positions, expressions, backgrounds, etc.... you just need to learn to draw.

That being said, I really loved your "Pana'Ma and sister Camden" comic. The ones before that were pretty lame, and the ones after that didn't really make any sense. But "Pana'Ma and sister Camden" was good enough that I'll let you continue to strip.

You're welcome.

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Debaser
April 28, 2005 5:46 AM

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I'm from Sweden, y'know...

We don't care about your handicap here. Stop making excuses.

Ah, okay.

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MikeyG
April 28, 2005 8:45 AM

"wanna give someone a fruit?" and "Pana'Ma etc." were pretty good. Especially the Pana'Ma one, but the rest were just all over the place and seemingly written by a 5 year old.

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andydougan
April 28, 2005 10:10 AM

I'd like to see all you criticising cunts write a comic in Swedish. Or any other language, for that matter.

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squidrabies
April 30, 2005 1:57 AM

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Telemundo!

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andydougan
April 30, 2005 6:09 AM

Usted no es uno de los "criticising cunts".

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Inflatable_Man
April 30, 2005 7:19 AM

Grainy footage of an obese black kid eating soup and smiling...

Sigs don't get any better than that, folks.

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