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valvenis84
April 24, 2005 8:20 PM

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andydougan
April 24, 2005 8:30 PM

It's not very funny, but as first comics go it's practically a da Vinci. You might want to consider punctuation, though.

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Inflatable_Man
April 24, 2005 8:31 PM

Bullocks. My first comic was a lot better. Still... I've seen worse.

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valvenis84
April 24, 2005 8:37 PM

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andydougan
April 24, 2005 8:48 PM

You've got worse with age.

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valvenis84
April 24, 2005 8:49 PM

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Screendummie
April 24, 2005 9:59 PM

Helloooo ladies!

--S. Dummie

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not_Scyess
April 24, 2005 10:27 PM

The first one you posted might've had potential, but you blew the punchline. It was pretty obvious that the cop didn't understand he was talking to the killer in the 3rd panel, so there's no joke there if you just continue that status quo. Liven it up with some wit or a twist we don't.

The other two, unfortunately, were hopeless. But I don't think you're hopeless as a stripper.

Yet.

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ChromeSteel
April 25, 2005 9:20 AM

Ditto what they said, but good job with the whole switching to proper punctuation thing.

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crabby
April 25, 2005 11:02 AM

quote:
Helloooo ladies!

--S. Dummie



You beat me to it.

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theReverend
April 25, 2005 2:15 PM

Your mom's hopeless as a stripper.

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