I think it's pretty funny...

I love the idea of this one... but the first panel doesn't seem to go with the rest of it. You could do more than just set up the joke... maybe make space guy say something that reinforces his confusion in the second panel.

Worked for me.

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I love the idea of this one... but the first panel doesn't seem to go with the rest of it. You could do more than just set up the joke... maybe make space guy say something that reinforces his confusion in the second panel.

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I made another one. I based it off my friend in real life.

Eh? Eh?

Again, I like the idea, but the punchline doens't quite make. The first panel definitely sets us up for something sneaky, but just saying the word "semen" isn't really sneaky. I think there are two things you can do with this.

Have blue say something actually sneaky, like "I heard that when people come here, they semen cunt fall blow job losses of 69% at an anal-ized rate." (It's not perfect, but hopefully you get the idea.)

The other thing you can do is to have the geek react in some way that's amusing, like, "Sneaky, but do you really find semen erotic?" Or "Oh. I see your point."

Sorry if I seem to be overly analytical, but, well, that's kind of what I do here.

OK, OK, OK. What about this one?

I think the lord of Anti-Scyess is off his rocker, both of those first two comics are great. The third one is the David Bowie of comic strips. I'm not really sure what that means. I like David Bowie though, so it's probably related in some way to a positive comment.

lol I really like the third one! the other 2 had potential so gj and keep it up!

Thanks doods. But I need help with something. Would the third one be better if I added a line in the last panel where the bartender says, "Oh yeah, me and him got one for the blacks by ourselves a few weeks ago."

And while yous guys are chewing on that, I made another comic I thought up last night.

I liked them all. The erotic punchline was funny, I liked that strip the best.

Mrs. Shaw was great too. Gimme some more!

I also thought Mrs. Shaw was very good. Some of us old farts might have gone with the name Mrs. Moorehead as a tip of the hat to Rod Serling (who memorably played on that idea), but I ain't complaining.

I thought they got better as they went on, with the last one making me laugh out loud =)

I think New Type of Segregation is great. The Mrs. Shaw comic is good but the joke is a little overused. But you're getting better, I'd say. (Based on only four comics, mind you.)

My name is Jeff, so that one comic just jarred me to the core.

Your comics are pretty durn good.

Thanks.

And another one using this Tobor guy.

Mood Music was great. Great "thinking outside the box". and that last one made me smirk. but then again, i think its virtually impossible to ruin a strip where TOBOR CORNHOLES!!

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XD very true, non scyess.

Today's featured stip contains an ACTUAL conversation from between me and my popular friend, Kyle, and my HORRIBLY unpopular friend, Johnny. I just added the very last line for effect.

The last line makes it... a good comic!

Really? Good enough for you to finally rate me, maybe? =D

I have "special" donor status; I'm not actually allowed to rate people. 8(

Is that like being a "special" child?

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Um...what? Make your own topic, dood.

Hari! Just post the URL of your comics to display them. You don't need any of the fancy HTML stuff you're attempting.

Especially since -- as you obviously haven't realized -- the comic isn't an image.

That comic was funny, except that everyone's seen that same joke 4 billion times already. But other than that, it's in good order.

Um...attempting? The comics are showing up fine for me...

I did a similar strip to that a while ago (as I'm sure most people have at one time or another)...

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... but your's is better.

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You better do what he says.

A rogue "border=0>" raped andy as a kid, so he's very sensitive.

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No offesne to any republicans. They're like Jewish Gays...they're so easy to make fun of.

I've made some more, peoples.

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Meh, I think this one's OK.

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I really like this one, though.

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And my new series, Getting the Girl. I wish I was a donor, so I could make this a set. But alas, I have no monies.

It only takes $10 or so to be a donor. You don't have to take out a loan.

I liked all the last four comics, especially National Masturbation Month.

Thanks! And I have ten dollars, I'm just too lazy to donate. Heh.

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I don't like this one too much...but I needed to get him to confess to her.

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I like this one, ecept for the fact in the second panel, the dwarf is supposed to have a quesiton mark after "Hari".

Ya, #3 is a little weak. #4 is really good, though.

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If you haven't noticed, I'm very bored today. I like this one though. I like using the character "Molars the Goat" for some reason.

Ejaculating into a goat's water dish might be considered "weird" in an American Pie movie, but in a stripcreator comic it doesn't particularly stand out.

Yeah...I was very bored...

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aaaaand something I made when I accidentally hit the Random button.

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I like the video game ones and when hes trapped under the bed.
Anyways, Awesome strips.
I give you 5 dollas. Thats your rating.
5 dollas.
I'll give you it Thursday. I'm gonna need to take a loan out.

Keep stripping...Oh!...Thats just sounds wrong...

Very good. Especially 7 and 9.

Geez...I haven't posted any in a while...

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^I rather like these two, especially the second one.

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^These three are part of my Randomization series and I quite like the first and third.

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^Please, before any remarks, read the title.

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^I made these three completely at random cuz I wanted to use the "ranger" character for something RPG/D&D related. I actually think they're pretty funny. They're literally like five minutes apart from each other.

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^Meh. I was bored.

And that's it. Feedback please.