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I'd tell you what I REALLY thought, but it'd probably make you burst itno tears, curl up into a ball, and suck your thumb for a few hours, so I'll sugar coat it for you. You suck. At the funny. Stuff. But keep at it. Maybe you'll get better. Or maybe you'll get worse or stay the same. That's what my money's on.

You make me want to be a better man, hari-nezumi.

Glad I could help.

I think that's your weakest comic. The ones you didn't post are pretty good.

Thank you sir

I think your comics would be funnier if you made them funnier.

What about this one
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That was funnier.

I am trying to be funny damn it! Why Lord why cant I be funnier!?

You can. In fact, that's exactly what biped said.

I liked the last one better than the previous ones, too. Maybe fuzzyman's comment in the first panel was a little hard to place in a context at first, but I'd rate it a "good" comic.

I took fuzzyman out and had santa yelling. Thanks to scyess recommendation. I like this version better!

I don't understand why "seem" is in capital letters in the first panel. It seems an odd place to put emphasis in that sentence.

Santa's emphasizing the "seem" to throw fuzzy's opening statement back at him by mocking his pretentious use of the word. In other words: sarcasm. Italics would also have worked.

Yup!

What about this one? On the last two I've tried the random layout and went from there.286467

Meh.

The last couple I tried using the random layout, this one I set up myself. Let me know if you like it.283635

I also tried reworking BlindDate

What about this steaming loaf?287423