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HCRoyall
May 27, 2005 7:43 AM

Or something like that. My grasp of humor seems to go up and down through all of my comics; this one of the better ones. That said you can understand how bad some of them are.

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MikeyG
May 27, 2005 9:09 AM

That one was coherent, but that's all I'll give you.

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HCRoyall
May 27, 2005 10:50 AM

I happen to think this one is good, but again...

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MikeyG
May 27, 2005 11:46 AM

KEEEEEEEEEEP trying.

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Hari_Nezumi
May 27, 2005 11:50 AM

Well, it's obvious that you're trying, and you find your comics funny, which is all that matters, but by posting your comics here it means you want our opinions so...your comics aren't funny. But that's just me.

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Hari_Nezumi
May 27, 2005 11:51 AM

I'm sorry, I take that back.
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I find this pretty funny.

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andydougan
May 27, 2005 11:56 AM

Uh, these comics are clearly pretty good for a new user. The previous comments on this thread call to mind people, glass houses and stones.

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not_Scyess
May 27, 2005 12:07 PM

The santa one was pretty worthless. The other two had merit but are a little on the weak side.

Why is it new people feel like they have to put their comics in HTML tags? What the hell tag are they even using? An tag? Do they not understand that the src attribute points to an HTML file? How do they even expect that to work?

New people! Just cut and paste the URL! The forum PHP will display the comic from there.

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MikeyG
May 27, 2005 12:53 PM

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Uh, these comics are clearly pretty good for a new user.

Maybe that's clear to someone with 24/7 deug-induced haze.

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The previous comments on this thread call to mind people, glass houses and stones.

Says the man who will never measure up to his alter-ego.

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andydougan
May 27, 2005 1:34 PM

What your blitherings mean is anybody's guess. I assume from the context that they're supposed to be disparaging.

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Hari_Nezumi
May 27, 2005 2:12 PM

Let me try.

Hmmm...the first comment seems to say that you're constantly taking drugs.

The second comment I can't decipher in anyway what-so-ever. But I agree in that assuming it's an insult would be hitting the nail right on the head.

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HCRoyall
May 28, 2005 12:29 AM

In all honesty I don't care whether or not other people like what I write. I know I'm never going to win any sort of award; I just like having some sort of feedback now and then.

Regardless of whether or not you like what I make, thank you for being honest.

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MikeyG
May 28, 2005 7:15 AM

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What your blitherings mean is anybody's guess. I assume from the context that they're supposed to be disparaging.

Were you saying something?

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Chaplin
May 28, 2005 8:45 AM

I don't know.
I like the Santa one.
....hmmmm.

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HCRoyall
June 7, 2005 3:17 AM

These three are actually a true story from my brief stint in college before I gave higher education the finger and joined the military. The last two panels of the third comic were exaggerated a bit, but the rest is pretty much verbatum.

/comics/HCRoyall/289651/
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lima
June 7, 2005 6:39 AM

I've scrolled through and read quite a few of them, and i like them :) Every one of them seems original, which is good, and makes it interesting to read them one after the other. Keep it up fella.

I live in a twig house and i throw fireballs. Luckily my twig house is protected by fire-retardent retards. *WHHTSHH* BACK ON THE WALL, CUTHBERT!

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lima
June 7, 2005 6:42 AM

Whoops, forgot to mention that your comics work a hell of a lot better, and are a hell of a lot funnier, when you don't put so much crap in the yellow boxes. Quit it! :p Its like dubbing a Trevor Brooking commentary over a Charlie Chaplin film. Ish.

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not_Scyess
June 7, 2005 7:20 AM

I like the concept of the last three but I don't think the punch is punchy enough. Also, the Negro Sense line was funny, but it could've been covered by one comic. The other two need their own jokes. (The third did, actually, have its own, but it wasn' that funny.)

Make them a little faster and more extreme (though not inane-random extreme).

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Chaplin
June 7, 2005 5:43 PM

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Its like dubbing a Trevor Brooking commentary over a Charlie Chaplin film. Ish.

Lima, I am now going to make a shrine of you outta Toenails and Noodles because you mention the greatest B&W/Non-Talky comedian of ALL Time!
I know I should be talking about HCroyal's comics but for a couple of seconds i'm making a sculpture of you.

*A couple hours pass*
OK, I'm ready. I like your comics and I think they're gonna improve over time.

I give you 450 Lima sculptures outta 460!

-Chaplin-

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HCRoyall
June 8, 2005 6:42 AM

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I like the concept of the last three but I don't think the punch is punchy enough. Also, the Negro Sense line was funny, but it could've been covered by one comic. The other two need their own jokes. (The third did, actually, have its own, but it wasn' that funny.)

Actually it couldn't. Those three are an honest to God true story, and I couldn't fit it all in one comic.

And I think I was trying too hard on this one:
/comics/HCRoyall/290018/

Or maybe it's just me.

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not_Scyess
June 8, 2005 7:23 AM

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Actually it couldn't. Those three are an honest to God true story, and I couldn't fit it all in one comic.

Well, if your purpose is to tell a true story, then, you've succeeded. However, if your purpose was to amuse the audience, you should condense the true story into a single comic at the expense of accuracy, since accuracy isn't really your goal. (If it is, then as i mentioned before, you succeeded.)

Tobor comics always suck, but the one you did didn't suck as much as some others do. Try some original ideas! I think you're getting the hang of this.

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HCRoyall
June 9, 2005 3:33 AM

I thought these were pretty original until I browsed the forums and found someone had already done a parody of bad VH1 shows.

/comics/HCRoyall/290271/
/comics/HCRoyall/290273/
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