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KingOfMusic89 June 10, 2005 7:59 AM	290549 290550
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PantlessHobo June 10, 2005 8:09 AM	cough...
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User #51182 June 10, 2005 2:11 PM	You spelled "awkward" wrong. I DID appreciate the strip very much as a WHOLE, though.
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not_Scyess June 10, 2005 2:43 PM	The office strip was beyond terrible, into the realm of awfulness reserved for 3-year-old leftovers you forget about until the power to your refrigerator goes out while you're on vacation for two weeks. The second had potential, but didn't quite make it. I also think you mixed up who should have a thought baloon and who should have a dialog baloon. Keep trying, though.
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User #51182 June 11, 2005 11:27 PM	not_Scyess, I appreciate your critiquing of KingOfMusic89. However, you spelled "balloon" wrong twice to let you know in advance of other posts that you'd make with that word.
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User #51182 June 12, 2005 7:36 AM	Let me try to fix that awkward sentence of mine. However, you spelled "balloon" wrong twice. This is to let you know in advance of other posts that you'd make with that word. [Correction made.]
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biped June 12, 2005 9:18 AM	"BLANCHE, BRING IN THE INVALIDS!"
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Hari_Nezumi
June 12, 2005 12:43 PM

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Let me try to fix that awkward sentence of mine.

However, you spelled "balloon" wrong twice. This is to let you know in advance of other posts that you'd make with that word.

[Correction made.]

Fer cryin' out loud, shut the fuck up about speling! Its not that impartent!

I aggree with not_Scyess on the komiks. The frist one is teribul and the secund has sum potenshal.

Hey comicstrip...I speld extru speshul 4 u!

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