Actually, not bad. Again, I think the jokes could've been more pronounced, or had more of a smooth flow to them. But the concept was pretty good, maybe.
From what I gather it's as if you're not too sure on where you want to take Butch as a plot. It has potential, but needs some polishing. Retool the earlier ones with a little more attention to detail so you can draw the audience in, do some pre-writing for the future installments, and you'll have a really good series on your hands.
