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The twist ending made it worth the effort of reading the first two panels!

This is one of my favorites! I rated it good but it was actually great. Pissn lightn bolts was great too.

the first panel was funny since i hadnt heard it, but the last wasnt that great. maybe if it was something like:

Listen, I don't know what kind of jokes you crackers tell each other, I'm just tryin' to tell ya she only let me go half way in

You're right Mandingo, that does work better. I've changed it accordingly, so you get the assist.

with my assists and your rebounding we're a shoe in for the state championship game

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The twist ending made it worth the effort of reading the first two panels!

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the first panel was funny since i hadnt heard it, but the last wasnt that great. maybe if it was something like:

Listen, I don't know what kind of jokes you crackers tell each other, I'm just tryin' to tell ya she only let me go half way in

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nah. your comic your choice

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the first panel was funny since i hadnt heard it, but the last wasnt that great. maybe if it was something like:

Listen, I don't know what kind of jokes you crackers tell each other, I'm just tryin' to tell ya she only let me go half way in

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Well, I'm the John Kerry of stippers. I flipped flopped and went back to the original. I like the idea of the brother in the third panel being clueless to the whitey's joke - the brother is just relating a story about his sexual conquest. The "sticking it halfway in" made it sound like he was telling a joke (unless he really did have a 18 inch schlong). I know, I'm a dick for flip flopping and a bigger dick to giving this so much analysis.

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