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GriffDizzle
July 10, 2005 6:12 PM

They're not funny. But I had fun. AND THAT'S ALL THAT MATTERS! :O

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OmniMarconi67
July 10, 2005 6:51 PM

I like the first one, that was pretty good. I haven't seen the movie yet so I want to see for myself how good it is or isn't, but everyone I know who has seen it thought it sucked, so I still can appreciate the sentiment. The second one is clever, but it doesn't quite hold up as well. I guess because the third frame is just a touch too random for it. But it's still a good start.

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biped
July 10, 2005 6:51 PM

Not very good comics. If you made them simply for the enjoyment of it, then that's okay. But since you posted them here in order to get feedback, then I must say that they are not at all funny. If you want them to be funny, then you must try harder to make them so.

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GriffDizzle
July 10, 2005 7:30 PM

Thanks for the feedback, both of you. I really have to agree that the second one lost a bit with the third frame. I was trying to see if random would fit, but even I can tell it doesn't. :P

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mandingo
July 10, 2005 8:01 PM

quote:
They're not funny.
liar

the first one was funny and the second one was right to the last morphing dialog baloon. you just introduced robot eyebrows for areallystupidguy's sake, why not make the punchline something about that?

i will put bipeds TITTIES!!! of the month money on your comics being liked if you stick around and keep making them

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GriffDizzle
July 10, 2005 8:05 PM

I just start coming to this site today, so I don't know who anybody is. If there was an homage intended, I would have made it clear. :D
Also, I made a number three. I think I'll lay off spewing them out so fast, lest my quality dips (lower...).

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Once again, thanks for all the feedback. :O!

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mandingo
July 10, 2005 8:23 PM

like that one too

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OmniMarconi67
July 10, 2005 8:42 PM

You unwittingly paid homage yet again, this time to Tobor, who is coincidentally just as horny. I hope your robot enjoys being cornholed...

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mrpoop
July 10, 2005 10:02 PM

I like the first one

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uselessthe1st
July 11, 2005 10:41 AM

they are great make more! ^_^

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