Let me know what you think.
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I laughed at this, but not for the reason you would want me to, I don't think. The punchline reminded me of a conversation I had not too long ago.

Overall, punchline good, set up not so great.

I was just thinking how funny that would be to do at a urinal.

It's also funny to walk up to a urinal next to another guy, slap him on the back and say something like, "How's in flowin', buddy?"

The comic was okay. It was well constructed and articulate and all but something about the cat's last line was too roundabout or wordy or something. It broke the flow of the humor.

I was wonderin' how you were going to work the cheeks=buttocks angle into it, and boy-oh-boy! Did you ever! Whoa ho ho! Ah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!

Thanks for the feedback! I did cut down the last panel which was a bit too wordy.

It actually took me a second to get that joke. Then I laughed. Funny.

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It's also funny to walk up to a urinal next to another guy, slap him on the back and say something like, "How's in flowin', buddy?"

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I had a roommate who was at a urinal once and I walked up to him and gave him a thorough manly back-pating while he was urinating. It freaked him out quite a lot. I highly recommend doing it to everyone you know (and some people you don't.)

Speaking of pink, what about this one?
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If the joke is what i think it is it's suberb!

And a bit subtle.

PinkDonkey was good, and not just because I used to date him.

Did any of you ever see that movie with Ben Stiller and Alec Baldwin? There's a memorable scene when they're both at the urinal. It's funny I swear.