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The first was funny until the last panel and would have been better without the captions. The second was amusing in a way, but the punchline lacked a certain something.

I agree with your assessment of the 2nd one... I didn't really like that punchline myself but I couldn't think of anything better at the time.

Two more comics, I think the 2nd one's way better.

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That last one was absolutely great. Definitely one of the best uses of the red robot that I have seen, and without the "TOBOR CORNHOLE YOU!" line.

I put my favorites first, blah blah blah!

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i like sally sue! and those crazy whores!. i like a lot of your dialog like the cops in the first cartoon and 'what the dickens.' i would have liked the last comic if at the end the ninja would have said something like, 'i've been waiting a long time to kick your ass, brokaw.' you use exclamations in your titles

that last comment was more information based

I like that punchline better too, to be honest! Someday I'll have to donate and make my comics slightly less sucky.

Here's a series of Kung-Fu Hooker strips 'cause my friend says he loves her.

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The first one the second one was funny the third one the punchline was the second panel was the first funny the punchline was the third one was funny.

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The first one the second one was funny the third one the punchline was the second panel was the first funny the punchline was the third one was funny.

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