1. Narration not necessary.
2. Making them humorous might help.
3. Proofread. Some of your typos are overlookable, however others make it difficult to understand the subject. Such as "rad" and "read" are two similar words that could easily be typoed as one another, but would make the sentence very different.
4. I liked #10.
5. Donate so you can delete one of the #14's.