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zeaver
August 15, 2005 7:36 PM

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zeaver
August 16, 2005 6:41 AM

COME ON PEOPLE, at least tell me it sucks?

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FinnNYC
August 16, 2005 7:05 AM

It doesn't suck but it's not good either so it's stuck in that no comment zone.

With that trippy background in panel 2 I would have used a hallucinogen instead of crystal (meth?) and followed that up with a related punch-line. The pimped mule idea is funny but I don't associate ride pimpers with crystal.. or hallucinogens for that matter. Maybe if Jesus turned the water to Colt 45 (if you want to force a stereotype) or gin and juice. Maybe you could use ecstasy and change the punch-line to a raveish touchy feely thing.

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FinnNYC
August 16, 2005 7:11 AM

...Ah, Cristal... the champaigne. I got that on the third reading. The trippy background lead me away from that. the champaigne does fit with the punchline but like I said, the background mixed me up... which removed the funny.

It's a good idea. Work out some other versions because I see this as a potential top-rated comic.

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zeaver
August 17, 2005 7:42 AM

ah, yeah, I thought that might have been a bad move, with the trippy background... but how else could I show the MAGIC OF JESUS?!?!??!??!??!?!??!?!???!

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mandingo
August 17, 2005 11:28 AM

i thought that last panel was great. PIMP MY FUCKING MULE, JESUS!

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mad_matt
August 17, 2005 11:28 AM

You inspired me to make this rather family-guy-esque attempt.

/comics/mad_matt/305071/

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