I'm new to this wonderful website and just wanted to say Hi all and check out my first comic. Let me know what you think! I like criticism, only helps me get better.

Look forward to talking to all of you!

-Justin

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Needs more ninjas.

More Ninjas lol... Nice... I'll try and include one in my next Comic just for you :)

for starters, you should probbly lose the narration boxes. they seem to be redundant in panels 1 and 3. then maybe stick to one background for a little while since switching 3 times is hard to pull off and make funny. then don't make the nail in head the punchline. you had no way of knowing, but it seems to have been done to death already

done to death already
.omg .lam .e
jejejeje, sed the pink donkey.

but yes, that was constructive criticism, and welcome, s_t. More ninjas.

This comic si great!!! OMGLOL!!! Oh, and by "is great!!! OMGLOL!!!" I mean it sucks. I didn't laugh at all. But you're new. You could get better.

Narration boxes 2 and 3 should have been omitted. As far as gamegeek comics go, it was okay. A decent start. I liked the punchline. Next time have more to it than, "Nintendo sucks, I'm driving a nail into my brain."
My biggest problem is your name. You're either a slasher or a thrasher. You can't be both. And you're probably not 21, so I'm guessing you're the 21st slasher/thrasher which (A) Is impossible and (B) Would be sadder than being the 1st slasher/thrasher.
Might I suggest "Slasher_mon-wed_Thrasher_thu-sat_I_take_sundays_off".