My previous ones are pretty crap, but I've just come back from my summer holidays and made two strips that I consider better than my previous ones. Musta been all the Doonesbury strips I read.
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Ta. If you like them, could you rate me? I'm at one star because of my other crappy ones. Actually, probably best to delete this account and start a new one. What do you think?
Unfortunately, those were no good either but I can see you've got the right ideas. That first one is DOA but the second could be funny. Re-work it a couple times with new punch-lines.
Forgive the double post, but I forgot to mention something else. Ratings are all well and good, but don't put too much emphasis on them. My highest rated comic is a 5, and it's one of my better ones; as long as you enjoy them and your friends like them, our opinions shouldn't matter.