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bltsandwich17
November 3, 2005 1:45 PM

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flipynif1
November 3, 2005 1:52 PM

reading between the lines i found it teh funny!

Keep up teh funny

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HCRoyall
November 3, 2005 8:49 PM

Do everyone a favor and mimic the cook in your comic.

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JESUSSANDWICH
November 3, 2005 9:16 PM

Get killed by bacon?

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HCRoyall
November 3, 2005 9:48 PM

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Get killed by bacon?
I was thinking just dying in general, but getting killed by bacon, a substance she claims to hate, would be just funny enough to make her death actually mean something.

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JESUSSANDWICH
November 3, 2005 10:16 PM

Like the death of Charles Foster Kane.

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UnknownEric
November 4, 2005 5:24 AM

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Like the death of Charles Foster Kane.
(whispering)bac-os(dies)

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kaufman
November 4, 2005 5:27 AM

Wait! It looks like you could place baconman flat on the snow. Hmmmmmm...

320841

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bltsandwich17
November 4, 2005 7:00 AM

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Chuckaduck
November 4, 2005 7:05 AM

I hate you.

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bltsandwich17
November 4, 2005 7:19 AM

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not_Scyess
November 4, 2005 7:59 AM

Wow. These are really terrible. I assume you're doing it on purpose for the "it's so bad it's funny" sort of effect?

I don't think it's working.

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UnknownEric
November 4, 2005 8:06 AM

It's so bad, it's just bad. Just bad.

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attitudechicka
November 4, 2005 9:09 AM

Can someone please explain to me how someone who supposedly got early admission (age 16) to college has such poor spelling and grammar skills?

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Chuckaduck
November 4, 2005 9:12 AM

She's lying.

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HCRoyall
November 4, 2005 8:05 PM

That or she went for a math degree. And I seriously doubt she's that smart.

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bltsandwich17
November 5, 2005 8:30 AM

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HCRoyall
November 5, 2005 8:38 AM

Spread... Sandwich hating... up my ass... Okay, that makes absolutely no sense whatsoever. You are definitely lying about getting early admission to college. Get back on the short bus and stop bothering those of us with functioning brains.

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bltsandwich17
November 5, 2005 8:49 AM

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not_Scyess
November 5, 2005 10:47 AM

That comic is actually a good set up for somthing... but the joke itself isn't funny enough to make it a good comic. Maybe if the 2nd pencil in the 2nd panel said something funny in response it might help. For example,

"You're lukcy I don't the sharpener."

Not great, but an example.

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kaufman
November 5, 2005 2:28 PM

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That comic is actually a good set up for somthing... but the joke itself isn't funny enough to make it a good comic.
You're missing the point (nyuk, nyuk) -- The pencil just was not too sharp.

Seriously, here's what I'd do to improve the strip: Why is a pencil asking what one pencil said to the other? Move the question up to the narration box, and shrink the comic down to one panel.

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