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PuterBoy
November 9, 2005 2:07 PM

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not_Scyess
November 9, 2005 8:47 PM

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I HAVE MORE!!!

What a shame.

You seem to have a sense of humor in there somewhere, but your comics are just slapped out there with no thought. Work from the perspective of a 3rd person who hasn't seen the comic before and ask yourself


  • Does the dialog make sense the way it flows?
  • Is the joke predictable or given away too soon?
  • Is the joke so fucking old that you shouldn't even bother?
  • Is the comic's sole source of humor the fact that it uses strong language?

Be more conscious of this stuff and you'll be a better stripper.

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HCRoyall
November 9, 2005 8:54 PM

I kinda liked #5 and #8, but listen to the one who isn't Scyess.

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JESUSSANDWICH
November 9, 2005 11:08 PM


"Seriously those were really gay"

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GreatestComics
November 12, 2005 8:36 AM

How great... We need a furrie to get the point across... Well whatever wets your whistle. =]

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