I did a 3 part series called Broken Heartyou read beaware they were based on a true story Thats how it was for me when my ex girlfriend and i broke up if you have ideas for a part 4 let me know ok.

I think in the next episode you should take your work to the next level, possibly via incorporating one or more of the following into your work as, in my opinion, the following aren't yet present in the works of JasonP:

- Sub-plot

- Plot

- Anything resembling the possibility that something, anything, might actually happen at some point

- Subtle use of ironic humour
- Character humour
- Humour

- Someone saying a stupid word

- A sign that there may be something, anything, remotely enjoyable to read in future installments

- Characters with back-story, individual emotions, attitudes and feelings

- Characters with something resembling a soul

- Characters

- People who say things which don't make the reader want to excavate their ears through their anus.

- Intelligent dialogue

- Realistic dialogue

- Dialogue

- 'People' saying 'words' which are 'about' 'something'

- 'People' spelling 'words' correctly

- Awareness of the diversity of attitudes of the prospective audience

- Awareness of an audience

- Awareness of the possibility that the audience may be reading the comic with the sole purpose of expecting to be entertained in any way whatsoever

- A sign that the author is aware of anything at all

- Anything showing signs of sentient life from your side of the computer

There you go, run with that kind of angle, but don't worry. I'm currently having trouble with most of them in my comics too.

JasonP you are a god.

I laughed at your newest comic more than I've ever laughed at any comic in my life.

/comics/JasonP/328765/

"I feel god wants us together"

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH

...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

/comics/JasonP/328479/

GOOD FUCKING LORD

You are seriously the king of all that is hilarious. I bow to you.

I haven't seen cowboys become friends like that since that preview for Brokeback Mountain.

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GOOD FUCKING LORD

You are seriously the king of all that is hilarious. I bow to you.

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i made a tribute
/comics/HotRodDeathToll/328896/

I'm only going to say this once:

If you're trying to make funny comics, you have failed beyond all belief. If you're trying to make a serious series, try using proper punctuation and grammar so that they are easier to read and make some sense. Also, continuity is important.

JasonP: KEEP MAKING COMICS.

YOU RUUUUULE.

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I haven't seen cowboys become friends like that since that preview for Brokeback Mountain.

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How's this for an end to your sereis
/comics/Smarmulus/327706/

All kidding aside, I think this is a good idea for the ending to your relationship series. Regardless of whether or not you use it I'm looking forward to part 4.

/comics/michaelpatrick/84396/

/comics/LuckyGuess/328706/
It's funny because it's true.

This guy is just too funny to be real.