Well, I'm a newbie, feel free to critisize my work,
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So, it's no good, huh? Oh well, there goes a few wasted hours...

There were moments that were almost funny, yet ruined by the presentation. There were moments that *could* have been funny if the joke weren't telegraphed from the 1st panel.

At least it's not the worst collection of comics I've ever seen.

Awww, that was probably my only good use of the Asian girls punchline ever, and now I feel like a big nasty person because of it. Oh well, I still like the strip. :)

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Awww, that was probably my only good use of the Asian girls punchline ever

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Of course, then you lose the inside joke.

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