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OzMac
February 22, 2006 12:17 PM

Here are a few choices from my Grim the Reaper series.

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LuckyGuess
February 22, 2006 1:19 PM

The first one would have been funny for me if you had used "does anybody" and not "does nobody."
The others employ a sort of twisted Family Circus humor, but it's too general. My suggestion, should you choose to care, is to darken it up a bit or pull some plot twists. After all, it's a series about a Reaper in Hell. It has definite potential.

Keep at it!

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not_Scyess
February 22, 2006 7:23 PM

The Family Circus reference was unnecessarily cruel, but there is something very lightweight about these comics. They were funny, but instead of punchlines they had hearty-shove-lines. I agree that there's great potential there, though.

Exceptions to my above comments:
#7 read like a recycled kids' joke. Get rid of it!
#6 was pretty damned awesome. The best, easily.

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theReverend
February 23, 2006 2:43 AM

I would add; penis.

Also: balls.

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